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November 14th, 2009, 6:01 pm

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Dregan , November 14th, 2009, 6:05 pm

The Mother of Bar'd

Just looking at this comic, I realise the 'Fun Fact' is pretty much the last pages 'Author Comment'. Turns out I forget the exact wording of a lot of these jokes.
I forget a lot of things.
Like the thing I was going to specifically tell my audience today.
Let's just hope it's not important.

Ah, just remembered! The whole Futurama reference is actually thanks to Forte, who noted the 'drinking beer to break down into energy' thing in his bar information when entering the cameo.

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Zak TH , November 14th, 2009, 6:11 pm


::ZASHU:: , November 14th, 2009, 6:13 pm

i chuckled

yoshi freak , November 14th, 2009, 6:13 pm

Le gasp! I just noticed something! Vas's tail is less fluffy!

Shard , November 14th, 2009, 6:18 pm

Vas: Uh, yes, I already knew that.

XP_Lulz , November 14th, 2009, 6:20 pm

You should write these things down.

Dregan , November 14th, 2009, 6:22 pm

Aye. I normally do, but I was on a walk on holiday, so my notepad wasn't really in immediate vicinity. Once I got back I'd forgot. D:

Floo Phantom , November 14th, 2009, 7:08 pm

Forte is retarded!

Eval Argahm , November 14th, 2009, 9:26 pm

. . .

Got the joke. It's just not particularly funny. Robot states the obvious, sarcastic reply. Eh, boring.

The last line of the comic is awkwardly worded. Maybe the joke could have been salvaged if that weren't worded so weirdly.

The joke probably would have been even better if instead of simply going with the trend of "Obvious statement, sarcastic reply", you thought of a response in the last panel that the audience didn't anticipate at all. Perhaps agreeing with him that he had some sort of cancerous growth, then hurried off to have it surgically removed?

Worth noting is the joke is kind of an in joke that is only funny if you know his body is mutated by choice, but nothing condemnable. In general you should try to make jokes kinda open to the audience, but I really can't blame you for it at all.

Imperial , November 14th, 2009, 11:53 pm

the fact that his body is mutated has been stated already in the comic any who's read the comic will get the joke

G.I.U.L.I.O. , November 15th, 2009, 12:19 am

Shelia's arm looks absurdly long in the top right panel...

ANYWAYS, obvious statement is obvious and I like how you referred to yourself in the third person in the Fun notes.

Cat Top , November 15th, 2009, 4:43 am

oh you duke nukem.
blow it out of your ass and read the whole comic first, i found it funny.

ForteTh , November 15th, 2009, 5:11 am

I R pointing out the obvious.

Evil Agram , November 18th, 2009, 10:30 am

To say the least, I got the joke, contrary to the testimony of the idiots above. I read the first strip. I know he mutated his body, I said that in my last post.

Now I have to ask you people to read the whole comment before replying.

Lugbzurg , November 21st, 2009, 6:51 pm

The same thing happens to me too, Dregan.

I forget how I worded that heroic scene of the assault in space to save the planet where Ko-

Maybe you should wait 'till the game comes out.

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