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November 14th, 2009, 6:01 pm



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Dregan , November 14th, 2009, 6:05 pm Dregan , August 23rd, 2017, 6:54 am


The Mother of Bar'd


Just looking at this comic, I realise the 'Fun Fact' is pretty much the last pages 'Author Comment'. Turns out I forget the exact wording of a lot of these jokes.
I forget a lot of things.
Like the thing I was going to specifically tell my audience today.
Let's just hope it's not important.

Ah, just remembered! The whole Futurama reference is actually thanks to Forte, who noted the 'drinking beer to break down into energy' thing in his bar information when entering the cameo.








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Zak TH unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 14th, 2009, 6:11 pm


NO RLY


::ZASHU:: unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 14th, 2009, 6:13 pm


i chuckled


yoshi freak unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 14th, 2009, 6:13 pm


Le gasp! I just noticed something! Vas's tail is less fluffy!


Shard unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 14th, 2009, 6:18 pm


Vas: Uh, yes, I already knew that.


XP_Lulz unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 14th, 2009, 6:20 pm


You should write these things down.


Dregan unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 14th, 2009, 6:22 pm


Aye. I normally do, but I was on a walk on holiday, so my notepad wasn't really in immediate vicinity. Once I got back I'd forgot. D:


Floo Phantom unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 14th, 2009, 7:08 pm


Forte is retarded!


Eval Argahm unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 14th, 2009, 9:26 pm


. . .

Got the joke. It's just not particularly funny. Robot states the obvious, sarcastic reply. Eh, boring.

The last line of the comic is awkwardly worded. Maybe the joke could have been salvaged if that weren't worded so weirdly.

The joke probably would have been even better if instead of simply going with the trend of "Obvious statement, sarcastic reply", you thought of a response in the last panel that the audience didn't anticipate at all. Perhaps agreeing with him that he had some sort of cancerous growth, then hurried off to have it surgically removed?

Worth noting is the joke is kind of an in joke that is only funny if you know his body is mutated by choice, but nothing condemnable. In general you should try to make jokes kinda open to the audience, but I really can't blame you for it at all.


Imperial unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 14th, 2009, 11:53 pm

@eval
the fact that his body is mutated has been stated already in the comic any who's read the comic will get the joke


G.I.U.L.I.O. unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 15th, 2009, 12:19 am


Shelia's arm looks absurdly long in the top right panel...

ANYWAYS, obvious statement is obvious and I like how you referred to yourself in the third person in the Fun notes.


Cat Top unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 15th, 2009, 4:43 am


oh you duke nukem.
blow it out of your ass and read the whole comic first, i found it funny.


ForteTh unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 15th, 2009, 5:11 am


I R pointing out the obvious.


Evil Agram unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 18th, 2009, 10:30 am


To say the least, I got the joke, contrary to the testimony of the idiots above. I read the first strip. I know he mutated his body, I said that in my last post.

Now I have to ask you people to read the whole comment before replying.


Lugbzurg unknowingly drank PUMPKIN FLAVOURED Cintreuse., November 21st, 2009, 6:51 pm


The same thing happens to me too, Dregan.

I forget how I worded that heroic scene of the assault in space to save the planet where Ko-

Maybe you should wait 'till the game comes out.


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